The tall piece of bamboo sets in the corner
as though keeping the walls from colliding
with the aboriginal turtle in mustard yellow hues
keeping a silent vigil, a respite, as the rain
signals a force of nature outside my window
I am reminded that I am a creature of water
my molecular being silent within a human shell
the wonder of a million droplets from a cloud
forming a single raindrop is mind boggling
as they gather in rhythmic action
creating puddles, streams, rivers, waterfalls
cascading exponentially into vast oceans
a home for other water beings living
within a life-giving force
and I listen in amazement at the symphony
that brings life to the earth I live on
where brilliant colors of flowers bloom
in gardens tended and meadows flourish
on mountains
replete with nature’s abundance of creatures
beasts walking the land and flocks of birds
taking flight tenured with bird song
am I not enraptured to know my heart
still beats within its fluidic capsule embrace
of the water that holds me ensconced
in safe keeping
that when the rain thus ceases its’ melodic sounds
the bamboo stick awaits but my touch
yearning to recreate rain’s wondrous music
the timeless aboriginal turtle
warm beneath my hand
© May 2019 Renee Espriu
Background Bamboo Photo Taken From Public Domain Pictures & Overlain With My Take On Aboriginal Turtle Art


A beautiful chant to life and nature’s power. Love the musicality, imagery and lyricism of this piece, Renee.
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Thank you so much. I hope you are doing well.
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Always my pleasure, Renee. Yes, I am doing well. Thank you. 🌈🌞🌿🌸
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I love this Renee, and I hope you won’t mind if I include a poem that this piece reminds me so strongly of, and that I think you would really enjoy.
THE WATERS OF MY BODY
Juliet Kono
Two days after giving birth,
my body was like a boat the sprung a leak –
breasts heavy with milk.
I wet the sheets.
I leaked through sleep and dreams.
I’d get up and my hair would be sticky,
matted like a cat’s wet fur.
Milk gushed into the mouth
of my child, and sometimes,
I thought he’d choke
on all the milk my body made.
And who was I?
Young girl in a pony tail
too young to be a mother
who went out for walks
and grew spots on her t-shirts
that spread larger
than the high beams of passing cars.
I remember a young man,
both of us surprised
at sap rising, slowly,
like thermometer mercury,
the weight of semen.
And all summer,
in the back seat of his car,
the water of our bodies rose and fell-
a water table of desire
that entered into the pleasure
of our first experience.
The encounter with water
has always been met with surprise:
menarche, broken water bags, water in the lungs.
Each water with its own color,
its own peculiar smell.
Sweet or swampish,
or fishy,
like the open-air seafood markets around town.
All my life
I could have drowned.
How is it that
the water has receded
from the shoreline of the body,
now that I’m older.
How is it that
all the water has abandoned
the sand, pebbles, driftwood,
left them open to the wind
and stranded above the waterline.
Aloha, dear one. 💗🌺😘
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Thank you for your kind comment and for sharing this poem. Aloha!
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Aloha! 💗
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How beautiful, Renee! So wonderful that you’ve inspired others right here ❤
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Such lovely words Renee, We once had a Rain Stick, 🙂 goodness knows where it went, I loved turning it this way and that creating the sound of rain, though we need never be far from its sound here in the UK lol..
Sending Love and thoughts your way Renee..
Stay Blessed.. ❤
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Thank you, Sue. I do love my rain stick but as you say, it isn’t much needed with so much rain…both there and here. But I relish listening in any case. Blessings to you my friend always. xoxox
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😘😊
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This is wonderful, Renee! I love all the rain/water imagery and the journey you take us on. Beautiful!
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Thanks Betty. I am not fond of too much rain but love the sound of it and how it can cause not only wonder in nature but of course, its’ opposite. I’m on the side of wonder! Take care
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I’m on the side of wonder too, when it comes to rain. 🙂 You take care also.
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