the Fall brought her to me warm and soft
with dark brown eyes and tiniest hands
reminding me nine months prior to the
month of December when passion ignited
fervor between cotton sheets and darkness
transforming cold into heated pleasure
where in the aftermath holidays came
filling the kitchen with baking of pies,
sweet sugary cookies warm from the oven
& the promise of love lasting a lifetime
Ā© September 2017 Renee Espriu
This is in response to Jamie Dede’s Wednesday Prompt which you can see at
https://jamiededes.com/2017/09/06/portrait-in-february-a-poem-and-your-wednesday-writing-prompt. The photo below was taken from Public Domain Pictures
and digitally altered by myself.


Beautiful poem that says so much. š
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Oh, I enjoyed this Renee – on many levels! Lovely images. š
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Thank you Betty. Went to the Fair today and melted but still liked going. Hope you are well.
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Glad you were able to get to the Fair. It’s been many years for me… Do they still sell those delicious, mouthwatering scones?
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So interesting, Renee – reflections on love, as I have been doing myself just this morning. Interesting juxtaposition, lovemaking and pies š Food and sex. Not sure you intended it that way, but two of life’s great pleasures, no? š xoxo
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It could be meant that way but it was many years ago now and having my daughter was a gift. Though no longer married…that too is many years ago now…I have so many children and remain expressly close to my oldest daughter. Thanks! š
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Renee, I know the kids are the main thing for you. And yet we are still passionate beings, are we not? Aloha sweetie.
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Passion can be many things and in that yes, I am still. Aloha!
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And that is how you sum up the Genesis in a cookie! It is a sweet little ballad.
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Thank you so much! I have many children but no photo such as this one, which I was happy to write something to go with it.
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There is so much warmth in your words Renee. You are expressing the purest unconditional love known. Thank you!
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I do try. The infant I speak of is my oldest daughter who is now 41yrs old. She has Lupus and has been such a gift as is her younger sister who is nearly 36yrs old. Thank You
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Infants become adults in the blink of an eye as they say! How you must cherish them š One of my best friends has Lupus but has an incredibly positive outlook despite the challenges. She inspires me in many ways.
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My daughter has such a positive attitude about life and has been such an encouragement for me after heart surgery. I wish I had her joyful spirit. š
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A beautiful poem Renee of remembered Passion, and sweet memories , š December here is certainly a month for snuggling under the Duvet š š
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I bet it is. Our weather presently is undecided if it still wants to be Summer or Fall. Thank you Sue! xoxo
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š May the Sun keep shining upon you for a long long time Renee..
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