***COLORADO LAGOON***

Always scorching heat in So Cal
enfolding me a sticky sweet embrace
thirsting for the cool of water
to lap at the brown skin of my face

Hopeful an outing in anticipation
to a place of sand and salt blowing
Colorado Lagoon a sleepy fresh water
would quench in a pinch for swimming

Tantamount to an ocean beach shore
concession stands to take your coins
even as a quarter sparkled at my feet
ephemeral as a cool wind purloined

© August 2016 Renee Espriu

Image Taken From Morgue File & Digitized by Myself

Lagoon

8 Replies to “***COLORADO LAGOON***”

  1. Well structured, Renne, and I like that you started with “scorching” and ended with “cool.” I can see that beach and even – though you don’t talk of scent – almost smell it and certainly feel the relief. Poem on …

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    1. It was and is very hot in California where I grew up but one could go to a spot by the ocean or like this man made lagoon and cool off. It is one of the things I miss about the area. Now if I visit it really is awful as I am no longer use to the heat. Thank you for your comment. Sorry the reply is long in coming as I found your comment in my Spam box for some reason. That hasn’t happened before so hopefully it won’t again. 🙂

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