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to be able to navigate through
timeless memories
steering clear of obstacles
careening intentionally
into elliptical forevers
stepping lightly past
moonlit nights kissed
by the fragrance of lilacs
spilling over from
sunlit days warm
as a breath of south wind
like peels of laughter
falling as rain driven
musical notes
cascading from
star dust covered bells
to bring back days on
beaches where the smell
of salt permeates the air
from briny ocean waters
to fall glistening
on your hair & skin
the smell of hot asphalt
beneath your feet as you
step lightly, a dance
of your own making
a revelry of heart and soul
to be able to navigate through
timeless memories
using a compass for
your thoughts
to guide you
on your journey of sojourning
& limitless imagination
testing the waters with your
inkwell muse….well,
what could be better
than that
© April 2013 Renee Espriu


not much is better than that…and having a compass to guide us that is nice as well…like the tactile touches in this…the hot asphalt…star dust covered bells, fragrance of lilacs…
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Thanks Brian! My memories serve me well.
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“careening intentionally into elliptical forevers”…I definitely would need a compass to make it through there…great imagination at work here…you must have an inkwell muse…nice
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Thank You!
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Love the expression “elliptical forevers”! Your poem is like a beautiful romance with life!
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Why thank you…and perhaps, it is, as these are the memories I love.
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nice…i like the images and the scents…hot asphalt…the lilacs..salt smell…a dance of your own making…ahhhh…nice..
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Thanks Claudia! I’ve been far too tired of late and not taking more time with my writing so with this I sat and thought a bit more.
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Nothing could be better than that… Love this sense of travelling.
and elliptical forevers is such a nice image.
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Thank You Bjorn!
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Yes, a wonderful journey here – a lot of sweetness – and agree with all that the elliptical forevers is a great phrase to capture a lot of it. k.
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Thank You and for suggesting this as a topic.
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I like the memories of those wonderful moonlit nights and those days in the beach ~ Nothing could be better than these ~
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I see you, too, like the ocean from some of your other writings. I miss it living where I do for I spent lots of time swimming in the ocean as a child. Thank You!
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Gorgeous – you’ve navigated us so well here!
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Thank you Rowan!
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Indeed, what could be better than that? What a fabulous trip down memory lane this was!
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed.
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..sounds like a wonderful trip through life..a great attitude to have to get one through the ups and downs of life…navigating ‘above’ it all…nice.;)
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Thank you!
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wonderful attitude to have for navigating the ups and downs of life…sounds like a great trip to take..:)
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Renee, Memories weave there way through our minds some holding us still within the moment while others drive us forward to our Dreams, the pointer of our compass is always turning as we look either forward or backwards ..
Your words here Renee, as ever always point us to ponder the importance our thoughts hold.. They forever steer us along the roads we travel as we try to follow the life which is mapped out before us…
Love your new background too.. Many thanks Renee for your visit… Sending you much love sent your way dear friend 🙂
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Love this trip… and the asphalt stanza really stuck in my mind…
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