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seeing
budding tree tops
with promises of life
a lone chickadee heralds songs
singing
© March 2013
Renee Espriu
I don’t normally do form poetry but was a bit taken in by Tony’s prompt and explanation so thought I’d give it a try. My take on a Cinquain.
This is for dVerse Poets Pub http://dversepoets.com/category/tag/cinquain/
reneejustturtleflight.com 
smiles…another springy verse…i like…we have buds on our tree…and i need to heed the song of the birds a bit more…it was a little cold today so i did not visit the porch first thing…perhaps tomorrow to hear them sing….nice verse…
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Thanks Brian! I so appreciate your comments since coming to dVerse.
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A lovely spring scene, I can’t wait for this ~ Nice work on the form ~
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Thank you!
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Ah springtime. It’s interesting how the short form encourages the seasons, even when not haiku.
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Thank you for visiting and your comment.
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I’m glad to see you were inspired to try, Renee. Very good…love the singing bird in the spring scenario. They’re such charming birds.
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Thanks Gayle! I am behind once again getting ’round to the sites so will be by to visit soon.
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budding, singing – yes, life’s promise is a joy.
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I do love Spring time and all that it brings.
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oh nice…i love listening to them when they announce spring…or even just a new day…
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Thanks Claudia!
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Perfect spring time poem. Lovely.
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Thanks Jamie! I hope you are doing well.
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Nests are being built as we speak and …write 🙂 Nice.
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Thanks Katy and yes I have heard more bird song recently.
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…what a lovely scene captured in words… i like… smiles…
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Thanks Kelvin!
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Cool images — both photo touch-up and song. I love that the sparrow is looking down.
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Thank you Sabio!
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You made this cinquain form sing. A lovely scene I now await to experience – hopefully soon.
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Yes, I hope for warmer weather so I can begin to work in my yard. Thank You!
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Oh spring sense.. and cinquain is a perfect bridge from non-form to form.
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Thank you!
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Wonderful!
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Thanks Laurie!
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You’ve painted a lovely picture that I can’t wait to see happening in reality. Winter has been too long, this year. Thanks for joining in, Renee.
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Well, the calendar says Spring is nearly here so we shall see. We have lots of flowers coming up and trees ready to bloom. There are already some cherry blossom trees looking especially nice. Thanks Tony.
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Wow, I know I left a comment here this morning. What happened.
OK, it went something like this:
I love the photoshopped pic and especially the chickadee looking down. Your poem fit is most nicely
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It is still here but for some reason you could not view it. Thanks again for coming and for your comment.
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Short and different I must say
Ian
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I have tried my hand a a Haiku but this is new to me and I have to say prose is my forte.
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