Altered Google Image Fall Leaves
a visual carpet of color
captures my eyes
dances upon my head
surrounding me
thin as tissue paper
albeit tiny veins
like a map of even
smaller proportion
i grab my coat closer
watching my own
personal harvest as
the wind carries them
across city streets
i remember all the
years past when i
shared them with you
© October 2012
Renee Espriu


Lovely warmth of creatIon Renee both in artistic form and word. You bring the images to the readers inner eye as we wrap our coats up with you as we walk the streets littered with swirling leaves. A joy to read Renee. Thankyou
I am hoping your daughter continues to improve and my thoughts are as strong as ever in her direction. Love and blessings my dear friend.
Sue xx
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She now has a surgery date but is on a waiting list just in case there is a cancellation. Thank you for your healing thoughts. Blessings to you my friend.
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Always sending to you both… 🙂 xxxxx
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Our days here are just as you describe now. Yes, coats pulled closer to keep out the snap. Beautiful imagery here.
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The colors are always something I love about the season and it is only too sad they don’t last longer. Thank you!
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Loved the image.
the words were as heartfelt and enchanting 🙂
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Thank you! I appreciate your comments when you visit.
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the personal harvest…a felt piece…the grabbing the coat closer…the falling..really a moving and emotional write..
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Thank you Claudia. I so appreciate your comments as I feel your writing has something I’ve yet to grasp in my own.
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That is very beautiful, Renee, very very beautiful. Thank you for sharing. 🙂
Subhan Zein
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It does seem that way and each day I go out I notice. I ride the light rail and they are there. I drive the streets and they are there. It seems so much a part of society…something we once tried so hard to not have. A difficult situation all ’round.
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so beautiful and full of nostalgia, like autumn wind!
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Thank You! We’ve had lots of wind lately and the leaves are everywhere.
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