Clamoring to the top a
precipice unknown as
silk unfurling
a banner adrift
on treacherous currents
carried along by
fierce determination
Passion unreserved
a love unbridled to
embrace a destination
mysteriously laden
sweet as aphrodisiacs
wonderfully laced
with wine’s afterglow
Not a single fruit
tasted nor a single
glass touched
only titillating
emotions encountered
clamoring to the top
precipice unknown
JOURNEY FULFILLED
© December 2011
Renee Espriu
reneejustturtleflight.com 
i like how you can just feel every line!
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Thanks Eva and thank you for visiting my site!
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Wow , thats a facinating writing , so many emotions exposed
Well written
Ian
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Thanks Ian! Some words when I write are simply there.
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amazing poem renee, your poems are feast for senses, the last paragraph is so very captivating.
tasting only through mind, not body…..
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Thanks Trisha! You always see right through my words and know what it is I am saying.
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Oooh, I love this dark metaphor, Renee – the promise of temptation (and that image is stunning)
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Thank You! Many meanings and I quite like that.
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Renee, loved the sensuality of this poem. Like Neruda in English! Also, the whole climbing metaphor, delicious! (wink) Amy
http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/12/02/the-day-i-saw-an-angel-fly-lyrics/
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Thank You Amy! Sometimes I simply get carried away but enjoy doing it so much. 🙂
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Fabulous imagery.
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Thank You! When I saw it I had to put it with my post. Nothing quite like it.
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