The conundrum of
making doldrums fly
to make way for
forever rainbow skies
that keep the
illusion of clouds
at bay so thoughts
are freed in a
healing way from
the condundrum of
making doldrums fly
© November 2011 Renee Espriu
The conundrum of
making doldrums fly
to make way for
forever rainbow skies
that keep the
illusion of clouds
at bay so thoughts
are freed in a
healing way from
the condundrum of
making doldrums fly
© November 2011 Renee Espriu
reneejustturtleflight.com 
It’s an art, Renee 🙂 Clever structure in this poem
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Thank you for visiting and for your comment. I try to do something a little different at times out of the ordinary but then that is how I live life.
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reading your poems helps keep the doldrums at bay Renee… For I am always enthralled with your poetry and time just passes all to quickly as I spend my leisure time among your thoughts.. have a wonderful relaxing Sunday Renee..
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You always make me feel so good, Sue, even when I’m so tired I can’t seem to gather my thoughts. I am happy you feel so comfortable in my world. Thank You!
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That is an amazing picture, but, your words are beautiful.
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Thank you! I must get to your site more often. It seems my energy…lack thereof…is a trial I must overcome every day so if I’m not visiting that is why. You have beautiful writing and I appreciate your visits here.
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What a beauty. that picture is as amazing as the picture you created in your poem.
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I thought I would not be able to find one as the words are more abstract then some I have written and there it was! Glad too as it was a tired night for me. Thanks Trisha!
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