Excitement personified, magnified
enthusiasm bubbling from under
the surface as a waterfall
thunders down creating a
foaming pool of energy
whence all accomplished
infuses wild happiness a
race won triumphant the
goal embraced yours
© March 2011 Renee Espriu
reneejustturtleflight.com 
That was fun. You built such a visual picture, I had to go towel off.
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This is exciting. I always wonder at the waste of all the work and love that goes into producing it, when I see the spraying liquid sunshinee!
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Very nice — love the imagery!
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nice
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This did indeed cause me to feel refreshed! Do it agin 😉
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splendid poem renee. very beautifully crafted and full of sweet emotions.
trisha
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